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请你先阅读下面一封来信。假定你是信中的Mr. Zhang，请你根据信中的内容写一封回信。信中应包括下列要点：

①收到来信，表示感谢。

②表示对新型AW----501录音机感兴趣。

③拟购10台录音机，询问价格可否降低（cut down th pric）。

④拟于二十六日前往贵公司看货。

来信

Bijing Branch

MatsushitaCo. Ltd

Fuxing Road, Bijing

Fb. 16, 199___

Dar Mr Zhang,

W ar told that you ar had of your school. I am writing to you bcaus w hav a nw typ of rcordr for sal and wondr if you would lik to buy it.

Th modl is AW----501 and it was producd only on yar ago. W would b happy to sll it to you for 560 yuan. That is th chapst on of th sam kind on sal.

If you ar intrstd in it, plas writ to m at th abov addrss. Could you suggst a tim whn it would suit you to visit us and try out th machin?

I look forward to haring from you.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

Sals Managr

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Placing an Ordr for Rcordrs

Zhongshan Middl School

143 Zhongshan Road

Haidian, Bijing, 400060

Fb. 20, 199___

Dar Mr Li,

Thank you for your lttr of Fb. 16. W ar intrstd in your nw typ of rcordr, AW----501. W plan to buy 10 sts of this typ. But th pric sms a littl high. W wondr ifyou could cut down th pric to ￥530 for ach. If so, w would go and visit you on Fb. 26. Is th dat suitabl for you? Plas rply as soon as possibl.

Yours truly,

Zhang Ying

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